Art Dump - Critiques Appreciated

So, I recently decided to go for a cartoony style when I saw someone else's cartoony art that inspired me... I'll post some stuff on this tread, but all of my cartoony stuff is at http://brukrlo.deviantart.com/gallery/31049595. I know I haven't uploaded much, but that's because I have like a million unfinished drawings sitting on my desk... Anyways, I would appreciate some critiques either on a specific artwork(s) of mine, or on my style in general. I would prefer that your critique be more well-thought-out than "I like it." or "I don't like it." And don't be afraid to state your opinion, but don't completely bash me either, man.....

Kira Headshot by ~BruKrLo on deviant ART

Fursona for Ubertech by ~BruKrLo on deviant ART

Pikayu

#51653 • 2011-08-07 11:20:15

#51653

I draw with a fairly cartoony style as well and I must say you're off to a good start! The shape and size of the muzzle looks great! Some suggestions I have for the Kira head shot picture is to watch the placement of her ears. The one in the front is too close to her eye and should be further back on her head. Also the pupil and cornea of her eyes need to be more even with eachother to prevent her from looking like she has a lazy eye. I really don't know much about dawing anthros, so I can't really say much about the second one. I hope that helped some. ^-^;

Last edited:2011-08-07 08:21:03

bamby

#45728 • 2011-07-08 01:22:36

#45728

Love them! Great Job!

Art Dump - Critiques Appreciated

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